In the process of archiving old challanges I accidentally deleted one of my favourites.

However, I thought it would be interesting to use the opportunity to revisit our poems about losing virginity.

If you've kept a copy of your original poem, feel free to repost it. If not, I'd love to read what new thoughts you have on the subject.

virginity lost, innocence ended
no meaning gleened
no metaphor extended
milestone encountered
passed and forgotten
it wasn’t that great
but, hey--it wasn’t rotten
the ironic twist
in my life’s master plan
the first time i had sex
the only time with a man

heh--i actually saved it. that doesn't always happen...

I lost my original, but I thought it sucked anyway. Here's my second attempt.

Wedding Night

You taste rich and malty,
Smell like creamy vanilla,
Feel like oily cotton,
Making something in me start to tingle.

Your rich baritone caresses my lobes
As do your butterfly kisses.
I squeeze your mounds of flesh
Rising with the passion.

Soon I will burst.
Once more, once more, once more.
Then shudders flow over me
Dragging me around the room.

I sink back into your arms,
Basking in your comfort,
Content to know this love.
You and I are finally one

Don't write much poetry, but this is the poem I wrote when this challange came up the first time:

First

Pain
It shots through me mixed with pleasur
He is heavy and breaths hard
Like me
It happend
It was nice
In the distance I hear music
People are dancing and the party goes on
There are grass-stains on my clothes
And blood in my briefs
I am amazed

It was then
Long time ago
I don't remember his face
But I remember his hands
I always will