05 April 2004, 03:01 PM
KSenaDancing
DancingMy feets fly
It feels like I would lift from the floor
But you are there holding me in place
Strong arms
Your arms
We are dancing
Dancing to the load music
I see you smile
You like holding me
And I like holding you
Close, close....
There is only one other thing like it
But we will get there later
When we are done dancing
There. Hope you liked it! I enjoyed writing it, I can tell you...

07 April 2004, 02:32 AM
mons*giggling* you're dirty.

thanks for the share... and the not so share "there is only one other thing like it" he he... that was quite cheeky. thanks for the read.
mons
07 April 2004, 06:08 PM
Gabber Moonshade,
*laughs* I quite enjoyed the...double meaning of the poem. It could be taken a couple of ways, and that's always fun.
Fun to read.

~Gabber
08 April 2004, 05:29 PM
KSenaLOL thanx guys! I got the inspiration from a swedish saying that goes:
"Dancing is a vertical expression for a horizontal desire."

09 April 2004, 11:02 PM
The TrollNice poem

and nice saying. Dancing is the best. It's so free... as that other thing should be if you get it right. I think I'll put some music on right now

04 May 2004, 01:50 PM
Free MadnessHey Moonshade!
Really cool poem...i loved it! Dancing can be quite erotic in it's way...to me it's also very spiritual but spirituality and eroticism go hand in hand with me in many ways!

Thanks for the share! Keep dancing!

05 July 2005, 05:00 AM
ArgeauxWhat a refreshing celebration of love!
