Mercurial driplets slither down the curve of my spine
And the taste on my lips is of sunshine and brine
As your fish-splash eye floats past smiling at me
Your dream-laughter echoes from a shell, hauntingly
We dive through bars of sunlight, teeth bared against the cold
Deeper still, into the blue, we join the mermaids' fold
Streams of silvery blue slip across our spines
As elemental visions dance across our minds
'Til ice comes creeping along my bones
And the dream is lost to what the body postpones

by eyezoom and Argeaux

[ January 08, 2003, 07:17 AM: Message edited by: Argeaux ]

[This message was edited by Lady Lazarus on 20 July 2003 at 04:39 AM.]

Like WOW Scoobie it rhymes and paints a picture in my head. cooool waater.

WHOOOOAAAA...... ahhhh a HYBRID scroller! i'm a-scarred! cool. i've always liked freaks. he he.....

mons

nice, nice
The ending was really satisfying. I thought as I was reading, now how is she going to wind this up?

It was beautiful, and sad. The things we love, the things we miss, the things we wish, all together, just like a poem should be.

Good to read something from you again.

zoomy and Argy,

Ooh... okay, I just have one main thing to say about that... LOTS of pretty pretty images...oooh... I like that. *laughs* I'm not even sure I got the reason behind the poem or anything like that, but I am sure that the images are very pretty.

~Gabber

I did not realize this was a collaboration! Very nice both of you. I just came back here to see if this was as good as I remembered. And it was.

Great imagery! I felt all blue and icy!