posted November 03, 2001 11:23 AM

Nanzar

OK Guys I will start another collaboration poem with a new twist. This time we write only one line each. We used to do this in a bar I once worked at/frequented. It was always surprising to see where it went.

To do this we will need to copy and paste the whole poem into each reply this time so it will be easier to read for the next person. (Like a piece of paper being passed around)

Here is the first line:

I rise with the sun

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bard4sharks

sleep with the wind

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Nanzar

into my head it spins

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Gabber

Unapologetic of the whistle it brings

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bard4sharks

Where is it from?

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mons

it wouldn't care to answer

* i cheated...i had gabber help my suffering line. he he *

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Nanzar

Still the morning calls me on

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eyezoom

drawing me from my dream world

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Nanzar

I grab hold of the clouds like rings

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eyezoom

as they dissolve into the reality of my day

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Argeaux

Rubbing my head, plodding out of bed

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bard4sharks

Thinking about my dreamy-dream land

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mons

where the break of morning was my companion

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Nanzar

where the wind whispered my name

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Argeaux

And I awoke full of lust and shame

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eyezoom

to face a day of infinite possibility

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Nanzar

born between two worlds

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eyezoom

in the grey dawn of realization

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Nanzar

as I rise with the sun.

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bard4sharks

I turn and look

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Argeaux

You are long gone, but I still smell you on my fingers

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eyezoom

holding as long as i dare to moist memories of our stolen passion

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mons

supressing a smile confused by guilt

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eyezoom

i turn by back on the rising sun to face the grey fog of my confusion

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Argeaux

Not feeling like I belong to you

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Nanzar

I never should have showed you my tears

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eyezoom

i never should have showed you my fears

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bard4sharks

It feels so good to let go.

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Argeaux

Although it has meant letting go of you

*****THE END*****

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Nanzar

Thank you Argy for putting this one to sleep

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Argeaux

I thought I should put it out of its misery.

Did you think we should continue it?

I can always take off my ending bit.

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Nanzar

Nooooo!!!

This didn't work as well as I thought it would. Oh well...We'll just have to try somthing different. Something to do with metafors next time eh? I think we need to tone up our creative minds.

Hey BTW why didn't nobody say nuthin bout my new siggy? Isnt it cool? Thats me ya know (and me)

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eyezoom

i'm working on an idea for challenge #6. stay tuned...