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Chief Chesty Forlock  |
Kaleidoscope Three times I tried to write Hands stretched out to me in the hall Clay under fingernails Electric band saw starts again I disappear beneath these plastic sheets Curled like a new born Wailing I have such potential It will take more than a month to deal with a lifetime of pain I may need something else to help me Blankets form between my fists Jagged cuts stare at me A head stuffed with bent nails and hooks Emotion flows in time with the blood I am walking and smoking Talking and thinking A magpie swoops past Fish on Friday Home on Saturday Back on Sunday It was safer then Following a timetable Dull and numb Spin that wheel again ~~~~~~~~~~  | ||
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Scroll Guardian  |
Wow, I like this! I think this is my favorite:
Good stuff.  "Even when you're down and blue, just remember that someone out there loves you, even if you don't know it and even if you haven't yet met them. There's someone out there waiting for you, remember that and keep faith. You'll get there." ~~Johnny Depp. | |||
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Scroll Desperado |
it's good to see you're writing again. keep it up... WHAT WOULD XENA DO?  are you sitting on the soap? sometimes, you just have to say 'what the f...' | |||
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Scroll Guardian  |
Argy, Words escape, suffice to say, I'm feelin' it, on a level I can't begin to describe. More, please. ____________________________  I <3 4 foot 11, blonde, operatic wonders from Oklahoma. There is no charge for awesomeness or attractiveness | |||
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| Chief Chesty Forlock |
Mmmmm, I just read it again and I can see a lot of changes to make. Thanks for the kind words though, folks. I need to leave more space for the reader. Something like this would be better, I think: Kaleidoscope Three times I tried to write Hands stretched out Clay under fingernails Electric band saw whirs again Disappear beneath plastic sheets Curled like a new born Wailing You have such potential It will take more than a month You may need something else Blankets form between fists Jagged cuts stare out A head stuffed with bent nails and hooks Emotion flows in time with blood Walking and smoking Talking and thinking Magpies swoop past Fish on Friday Home on Saturday Back on Sunday Recite the timetable Dull and numb Spin that wheel again ~~~~~~~~~~ | |||
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